This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Kristian, Oscar here from south hornby. I like how you labeled the shops and the playground and all the other stuff. I remember making something like this but for south hornby. maybe next time you could give us more blurb and make the picture fit in more. Have you made another birds eye view before? Bye!
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Hey Kristian, Oscar here from south hornby. I like how you labeled the shops and the playground and all the other stuff. I remember making something like this but for south hornby. maybe next time you could give us more blurb and make the picture fit in more. Have you made another birds eye view before? Bye!
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