This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Kristian it's me Mark from South Hornby School, I really like how you worked hard and how you put important information for the others that doesn't know about Extreme Weather. This reminds me of The Flood that happened in Philippines and it has no electricity for 3 months and It has a heavy rain and heavy wind. But maybe you should put important rules if it has a crazy weather just to make them safe, I like your Information Report.
hello Kristian I`m jed from shs I really like your work you should put a cool background of lightning I really like the parts in fact three. I wonder kristian if you could do one about the pyramid?
Hello You Have Done A Very Good Job At Your Imformation Report. Maybe Next Time You Could On Slide 6 Make Another Slide And Put Pictures Of Everything Hail, Lighting, Heat ,Cold and Raining. But You Have Done Very Good. Bye
Hi kristian I am jyoshika from south hornby school. I really like your way you done for the information report about the extreme weather. There are also so many facts in the report. How did you know the facts. Can you please learn to me about the facts. Thank you By jyoshika
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Hi Kristian it's me Mark from South Hornby School, I really like how you worked hard and how you put important information for the others that doesn't know about Extreme Weather.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of The Flood that happened in Philippines and it has no electricity for 3 months and It has a heavy rain and heavy wind.
But maybe you should put important rules if it has a crazy weather just to make them safe, I like your Information Report.
hello Kristian I`m jed from shs I really like your work you should put a cool background of lightning I really like the parts in fact three. I wonder kristian if you could do one about the pyramid?
ReplyDeleteThanks.Yes I will make one about the pyramid.
DeleteHello You Have Done A Very Good Job At Your Imformation Report. Maybe Next Time You Could On Slide 6 Make Another Slide And Put Pictures Of Everything Hail, Lighting, Heat ,Cold and Raining. But You Have Done Very Good. Bye
ReplyDeleteHi kristian I am jyoshika from south hornby school. I really like your way you done for the information report about the extreme weather. There are also so many facts in the report. How did you know the facts. Can you please learn to me about the facts.
ReplyDeleteThank you
By jyoshika