This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Kristian It's me Mark I like how you did your poems I remembered making Limericks with you at Literacy but we moved on to other poems but I like it!!
Hi Kristian, I really like this work, there was nice rhyming! This reminds me of when I did literacy last year with Miss Jack when we did some poems but they didn't really rhyme! But on the second slide you need to fix up your Name! Did you find this fun?
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I like your poems Kristian, they sounds good and very funny too. Good job!
ReplyDeleteHi Kristian It's me Mark I like how you did your poems I remembered making Limericks with you at Literacy but we moved on to other poems but I like it!!
ReplyDeleteHi Kristian,
ReplyDeleteI really like this work, there was nice rhyming! This reminds me of when I did literacy last year with Miss Jack when we did some poems but they didn't really rhyme! But on the second slide you need to fix up your Name! Did you find this fun?